Engaging dialogue, compelling characters - I'm fully invested in Athena's story! After all the mistreatment she's endured, I'm eagerly anticipating her return
This a possibly good story in the making but it’s hard to understand. It’s needs more meat in the chapters. Bc it feels like your skimming through what could have been an amazing fight. Also you need and editior or one with a lil more experience no offense to that person.
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