Cute story, and plot. It needs some serious editing because the constant name mess ups are sadly distracting. Either have it made into the BTS fanfic it is, or rename the characters and keep BTS out of it.
Since August mentioned causing a dead zone to appear, Albus was certain that this Aheal was in the know about August being a dark dryad. The flow of the conversation felt a little bit off, though, it felt like an interrogation and if it was then… Albus looked around. There should be some familiar items around - oh, an orb of truth among two regular gems, and a glass of deceit hanging by a lamp, masked as a windchime.
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