Giving up 75 chapters in. Either the story was written quite poorly or the translation's butchering the story.Its quite quite difficult to follow whats happening for several reasons including missing or slightly malformed sentences which make it quite difficult to understand what is happening and make you think you may have missed a paragraph, An overreliance on Chinese poems religon and mythology which could work if any of it were explained - as it stands it just seems like a way of extending the text.Overall it had potential but I don't think it'll ever really be worth reading.
Really interesting so far, the world is somewhat unique but also has enough common elements to make it easy to understand. The protagonist is fairly interesting as well as the somewhat different direction of the story. The only two flaws are some spelling mistakes and that some pf the charecters are cliche’s.
I don't know about y'all but I kinda want to read some more chapters, naturally even though the further chapters might not be the best at least for now it seem decent enough to read.
very interesting i really liked it, i liked the plot and the story, i also really liked the character of the protagonist he is the guy could only be less cowardly but it's getting better, more heroines so far they are good, they have a clarismatic personality, just a little loose screws, I recommend it a lot, you won't regret it
This is Garfield. I just made this story cause I was bored. Really, Really Bored. I used the story to get my own Writer to gold.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
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