this novel seems to be mainly focused at praising the non-existent good qualities of china and pointing fingers at rest of the countries and telling people how china is superior to every other country(this guy sounds like a scammer trying to sell fake goods when he is trying to do that😂😂🤣🤣)
I have through most of the chapters and I have no words to describe how wonderful this novel has been to read. It is one of the best I have ever read. Nice work, Author. Keep it up :D
the writing is pretty bad.. some mistakes and author uses abbreviations a lot.. he uses "ofc" instead of "of course" and "cause" instead of "because" which are not good english.. it's okay to use in spoken english but not in written english.. especially in a novel.
Hello everyone,It's been a month and over 30,000 words since I released the first chapters, since we're right in front of the 50k words mark, I feel it's time to do a decent review of what I think of the novel, myself.Before I start, I would like to say a few things. At first, I started writing out of boredom, but before I knew it, I was absorbed in my own story and I started to enjoy writing for the story itself. It was both fun and pain sometimes going from work to writing, from writing to bed, and back to work, every.single.day.However, I still managed to deliver quite a lot of chapters, even though it was my first time writing. So let's see what I think about the novel so far.The first ten chapters are both good and bad. They are sophisticated but not perfectly delivered, there are grammatical errors and some chapters are boring to read. However, lately, I've been trying to go through them again and polish them as much as I can without changing any information for people who have already read them.If you survive those chapters the writing should get better with each chapter, it's still a bit messy until chapter 25 or 26 when I started to pay a lot more attention to how I write.The progress of the story is a bit slower, but from the 19th chapter, you can look forward to a series of actions. But don't worry because some of the actions are in the earlier chapters as well.I've also increased the word count in each chapter with almost every new release. Or at least compared to the first 10 chapters.With the current latest chapter, I delivered what I wanted. And we can now start a new saga. A saga of friendship and companions, rivals and enemies, and much more. Please look forward to the next chapters.
Looks like a Triad Mafia Novel, if just based from cover alone..............................................................................................
Valentine: "So let's start off with the basics, I already have your name, gender and age. I want to know how exactly this whole thing started, no details spared."
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