Here you get to watch the MC repeatedly let his loved ones suffer and continually fail them. You see how he gets used and tossed around by everyone else and constantly fooled. MC gets a 0/5 for intelligence. At least he gave his family a poison land technique.
Warning, this is MTL Webnovel are selling you. If you want to read this book with the feel like the old er gen then read Beyond the timescape. This is the MTLED VERSION with multiple cuts in between chapters for more money for WN! Deathblade translation is a million times better and is not directly MTLED and AI. Unbearable to read. Webnovel is the biggest scam right now! The real translation for this book is in WuxiaWorld with about 300 chaps! I hate how this will shift er gens translators and his own writing to worse from the readers perspective. I was almost tricked
translation quality is good, the premises is good but the concept of Tri gu sect rule is not gonna work. Even in demonic sect that kind of rule only make their demise faster (unless the sect leader have golden finger). I know the author wanted to use the concept of raising Gu in a pot as sect rule but it just not gonna work with human. Ok say that the higher up did not care about outer disciples at all, that inner disciples can send their people to plunder the sect resources like meat Gu food and than when the Quota is not reached the higher up will punish all the outer disciples(idk maybe kill them and take they Gu to eat or something) that is pure stupidity. Say that if they do that, than sect outer disciples will become less and inturn make the new inner disciple lesser, this will cause a gap in their sect generation compare to other a lil smart(not a lot just a lil bit smart) that have rule slightly good rule to prevent their sect resources go to other place(I.e sell to outside market to fill some people pockets), the said Tri-Gu sect gonna suffer a great lost if their sect enter a war with other sect because of generations gap. That still did not count when they Sect fight with Gu nemesis(phoenix,fire type cultivator) as I remember the author keep saying this is dog eat dog kind of world, it will make more so for other sect to target Tri-Gu sect. That if, if the author care about logic at all. But if He(or she) did not, than... just ignore all my comments above☝🏼🙅🏼🙈
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Betrayal stories are always interesting because they need you invested in each and every character first while baiting you until that very fateful turn. WonderWorld manages to do just that with its cast of characters and it's definitely good imo. Thanks for this!
the world is very thought out. the MC is on a path of revenge but I'm only on chapter 10. than again I haven't stop reading it the past few days. I can't wait to see it in like an anime or manga version of the book.me last night at 3am
Upon my journey to find interesting mc I def think Lance/Ellis is one of them and shaping to be what I think could be an interesting and complex story judging from the first two pages.
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