The story and the past is good and the development of the story is like a smooth water flow but have u thought that when the acloplyse started human laws will not crumble very fast and the mc behaves like when he is from the past because humanity will not crumble in a day at least it will take a week or so. In my opinion aurthor u have disturbed the flow of river when he trash talks those police officers because everyone has a self respect and will not bow down easily so that’s the very clear that u have messed the story Sorry for the harsh words and if u read it u can read some other authors writers work and u can gain some insight. I don’t know how u good reviews thought they didn’t even pointed out simple mistakes 😞Even though it wasted my time typing I like your world background hence i thought I pointed these things if not readers will get disappointed and will leave the novel 😑
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Novel is very good. I read raws couple months ago. After few arcs author forgot there is a thing called Logic. So I dropped it. Villains will be at same or above cultivation of MC even though MC has system, terrible cultivation talent, adventures, his family support but even without all these Villains will keep up or have cultivation realm above MC. ALTHOUGH MC WILL HAVE MORE COMBAT POWER AND CAN EASILY DEFEAT THEM BUT STILL HOW CAN THEY HAVE MORE CULTIVATION REALM THAN MC EVN WITHOUT ALL OF THE MENTIONED ABOVE THINGS.
This... this really something beyond any harem story available. If you like harem + sci-fi + pirate theme combined with star wars-like plot, this story is really for you. Definitely recommend, mostly because the plot is super intriguing.
interesting concept but falls a bit short. I ended up just skimming the chapters at some point since there are a lot of repetetive "he freshend up, ate, and went to sleep. woke up and trained.." repeating. and it is to slow paced for my taste. dropped when I felt it had been aged since he progressed in any meaningful way and I looked ahead seeing there were still like 30 chapters until his next breakthrough.
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