Diavazo Logs: Motivating a Bookworm Protagonist

Overall I am liking this series. It seems to be similar to Warlock of the Magus World but seems to be no where near as dark, more like a parody as far as I can tell so far.

Looking forward to more.

Hello! Author of Diavazo Logs here.

So I thought I'd give a more detailed overview of DiaL while avoiding spoilers.

DiaL follows the two main characters, Nori and their AI partner, as they travel through Gaellia—a world that would soon become the battleground for a game where Winning meant Everything (and there is only one winner). Of course, Nori wants nothing to do with it even though they're a player. Diavazo Logs is a story of an AI pushing his reluctant partner to be a "hero," helped along by the fact Nori's "Luck" really is to be admired.

TL;DR: DiaL is about a "not my business" protagonist that gets dragged into trouble and problems due to their righteous AI partner.

I'm very glad the Inkstone publishing platform is finally rolled out since I've been waiting for months to share my titles here. I'm one of the very first authors trying out the platform so there are bugs but it's to be expected! (Root Ball Prison Cell is C15 and She Brought Me Cake is C16 instead of C2 or C3, respectively. Hopefully, that will be fixed soon though.)

Oh, yeah, updates. Release rate will be 10/week—double on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. I'll try to maintain a constant buffer as long as there is interest.

Definitely an original to read!
Story got potential, there is a system!

Fun & puns, what else do we need?
Good grammar, yeah we need good grammar! We got good grammar, the selling point of this novel is the grammar 👌🏻.

I love it. 5/5, hope this will help you keep writing.
Now I just need to write 140 characters.
Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato.

For me, the first 37 chapters are quite good and entertaining. Except that, I hope there is more of other characters and their interactions with MC. Right now, we all met few of the characters but it feels like there is no effect or anything to the MC (except for their AI, no.37). But it is promising and I really would love to read more.

The story is quite good with a fast paced development (im 30 chapters in). The first few chapters could have been put into one because they were unnecessarily and last but not least - 30 chapters in and i can't tell if Nori is a boy or girl - what the hell does nonbinary even mean!!!!

Fishy and fishy writing. Good story with fish from almost every sea
----by hapey



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So far this novel good points are:
1- a Mc with a sassy personality
2- a Mc with a sister complex even so the sister is not in the novel, she had mentioned the sister so much that I wonder if she got trap in the alternative world by her sister
3- another novel with an AI system so those are fun

Bad points of this novel
1- the world the MC travelled is soooo boring, I feel sleep reading because of it, I hope in new chapters something really interesting will happens
2- the Mc thought are really redundant

so after saying all this I added it to my library  😁 I have the feeling I will be pleasantly surprise ... I will give it a try