Cute story and interesting story line, but in the first 7 chapters I have no idea if Emma is his girlfriend or sister. Also, the way his parents act makes no sense and where are her parents through all this (if not his)? Needless to say, the story needs work but the Hailey/Percie storyline is cute.
Before she could say anything, a man appear behind her I couldn't see his face but all I saw was him slicing her head off....I see her head rolling onto the cold floor...I didn't have to strength to scream nor cry...I simply passed out.
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