I have read the entire novel beside the last 60 chapters because author the rushed ending and left a cliffhanger.There are many plot holes, one of which is that mc promise to marry many female lead characters but only married and loved the main female lead making all the previous character development with the others female characters pointless and could only be considered filler for the story. Plus there is alot of filler. Like about 50% maybe more maybe less.
Started strong ended up being another cliche wuxia novel, recycling every old tired same situation. From your stereo typical super spoiled young master of a big clan that offends and goes after everything with a pussy. This has to be one of the most generic wuxia novel to date. Do not waste your time and stones on this one. Not to mention the MC is a dull uninteresting generic MC. Same old great but dumb ass hell on every decision mc. Had such high potential but if you read this 75 chapter's in and you will feel nothing but Deja Vu from plot to characters to situations. Youll be like wait haven't i read this before 😂
Same cliché cultivation story like other 99% of stories about cultivation which are on this site. Old and powerful guy reborn back in time, but acts completely like naive idiot, apart knowledge about cultivation Mc is just average naive ****. If you read this story you will get:- Completely random stranger saving, even though Mc doesn't even know them and is not related with them in any way possible- If pus*y iš in trouble Mc will immediately jump and risk his life saving it, because he want to lick some- Mc acting like naive child, even though he is suppose to be old monster- exactly the same plot like in any other cultivation story, except different names for characters and other stuff.Overall don't waste your time with this story, there is nothing unique about it, neither its interesting. Basically another trash story which is overrated
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I really liked your book, I'll give your book a full 5 stars if it keeps improving even further. I hope you continue to write many more chapters:) -Random Reader
What in the world this is gone from trial read I would they drop it it's a great story plus its only been 19 days at least give it a month it can't be the coins it's gotten a few thousand
Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.
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