So many \"do not unlock yet\" chapters, super frustrating. what is going on with this book? I enjoyed reading it until the technical errors which are taking way too long to be fixed.
Very good, but there are two negative points that made me give it 4 stars, first the appearance of the MC, generic super beauty appearance, long black hair, jade skin, super handsome that attracts everyone and blablabla literally the same appearance as 99% of the protagonist of works of cultivation which takes all the grace out of an MC that wanted to be common, the second negative point is that the author simply destroyed the cultivation system, MC in the golden core but kills people with 3 or 4 great realms stronger, or be who cares about MC's cultivation ? he kills everyone being weaker so all the cultivation part was killed by the author but the rest is good, 4 stars
*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism:Your cover art style does not seem to match the style of your synopsis nor your novel, I'd personally suggest a change, however, I see that your readers seem not to want that, so do as you see fit. Also I noticed some minor grammar issues in the first few chapters. I notice it seems like the only truly important character of the first 5 chaps is the MC, I hope there are more later in the story.Positive Feedback:Good, albeit confusing, character build up of the MC. I definitely see that you know where you are trying to take this, that is very good, some stories lack that. Keep up the good work.;,;.Personal Feedback:I'm sorry, I will not be continuing this story. It's not really something I want to read. While you did good enough that reading wasn't hard on me after the second chap, it still wasn't really fun for me. HOWEVER! Don't let this stop you from writing.. You have many fans and will let them down if you do. I ask you, Please finish what you start (even if only to spite the haters).;,;.
Before reading this novel make sure to turn off your brain (Yes turn it off)MC is 1 of those Stupid Idiotic Moron.MC also mention that he read a cultivation novel before so he should know that leaving the cave he is currently in or anywhere with a weak/low cultivation is courting death.MC keep complaining all the time despite the system helping him.Plot is very bland, generic. I don't mind the plot if the MC is not a brainless like the MC in here. Yes brainless, Brainless to the core so if you get what I mean then dont waste your time reading this novel, it will definetly gives you a frustration and irritation not worth enjoying.5/5 in writing because it pretty much clear and understandableThe only downside of this novel is the MC.
..................................................Great work. The Grammer can be improved.plus the story line is interesting.work more on your chapters.
Again, my sincerest appreciation to everyone who shows their love and support for Picturesque. I'm planning on finishing it soon and writing another masterpiece.
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