sad this didnt get picked, it was way better than low dimensional game by a ton, hopefully there Is another translator that will translate this novel, the pacing is average, and the world building is incredible, each mc ' thingys have different storylines, shame we could only follow the tales of 2 mc's cause this is not picked
so I really enjoyed this story, the author does a really good job of building up the world and the game in general through I do think the tutorial section was a little bit rushed and would have been better if the actions of the character were told less and shown more. I really like where the story seems to be going and have high hopes for the future of this novel.I also would recommend the rest of the author's books as well as those are also top quality books.
So far so good. Nothing really to complain about. All very positive results. Not to fond on the MC being betrayed by his loved ones but that's just me personally. The idea is good and it's a good start to the novel. Looking forward to seeing what this novel will become. Hopefully not too much betrayal. Would be cool to see some guilty individuals who regret what they did instead of being the heartless twits that are so commonly seen on this platform. Other than that, I'd say it's a good start.
loving the work. πππππππI hope author can explain more about the what type of snake Hiro is...and maybe about his past? anyway keep up the amazing work π₯π₯
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