Demon King's end (Inactive)

I loved it. But the story with her dad was just rushed, we didn't get to know why he did what he did

I think your concept about "system" is amazing. But your concept about "skill" or "ability" is suck dude.Reason :1. You never give description about ability or skill whose MC got. (Not all readers known animes and systems you are adapted)2. There is never ever disposable skill or ability. The disposable skill named "scrolls" in fantasy story. And that not in category skill but in category item (disposable item)3. Why dont make skill have level? And you can upgrade skill level by use poin too.4. If you want make there are a limit chance used item, you just need skill. And regenerate the chance used every day / week / month / year.Example :Level 1 : chance used : 100x (max : 125) regenerate 1 chance/weekLevel 2 : chance used : 100x (max : 250) regenerate 1 chance/5 dayLevel 3 : chance used :100x (max : 500) regenerate 1 chance/3 dayLevel 4 : chance used : 100x (max : 1000) regenerate 1 chance/dayLevel 5 (max) : chance used : infinityIf you can understand this. Thanks dude.Because i feel a little confusing when read your story. (I only known famous anime)