Daughter of Smoke & Bone

average system xianxia transmigration... nothing really new or outstanding in this one... plus it is completed. compared to trash webnovel has been putting out lately this one can be considered masterpiece... and it has ok translations...

This book is very good!I am new here on webnovel and this is the first book i’ve been reading. Although I haven’t finished the novella/novel (depends if the total word count is somewhere between 17,500 and 40,000 words), from what i’ve read so far, the writing quality is very good but there is some wiggle room for improvement and the stability of updates is quite good as well. The story development is very smooth as we, the readers, can see how the relationship between Yao Ling and Yao Ying is changing in a natural development. However, the character design and the world background is where I find most of my problems lay. We, the readers, are told that Yao Ling and Yao Ying are beautiful - that much is certain. However what we aren’t told is why. Yes we do get some descriptions of their beauty and alluring temperament, but what we don’t get descriptions on is why people find their appearances beautiful and why their temperament is so intoxicating to those that surround them. We are also not given much information about the world background. We are told by the beginning of the novella/novel

As a medical student I can say that this novel is very good and has accurate medical terminology and elements so far. Yes, it is medicine orientated, there are many special terms  (medical jargons) used all over the place. So far it it heavily surgery based but I can see that he may cover many other fields in the future. This novel is a blessing for me!😂 So interesting to read...

Any one know the name of the original work, as in before it is translated? Like the Chinese name of novel if it is translated from Chinese?   

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Tl:DR C+, Has potential, take a binge when it hits 75 chapters or so to see how it develops.The Good: the same old good rpg system in a cultivation world concept with a solid twist. The basic premise of this novel is well thought out and the author has spent some time to flush it out in the chapters. The Meh: like many others in its category the novel needs an editor. In its current form the novel reads like it was written by a high school freshman. I understand that the author is not a native English speaker, so kudos to you friend for putting the effort into this work, but you have lots of room to improve. Look at Once a Human, Now a Paracite as proof that improvement is possible. God speed.The Bad: the adage of "show, don't tell" went out the window. The pacing of the naritive needs improvement and the ******* and release cycle might as well not exist. In its current form reading this novel is interesting but unsatisfying.

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