Dark King

Looks Amazing looking forward to upcoming chapters

it has mechs. a lot of mechs. and I like mechs. I may be biased but at least I know my bias. I enjoy my bias for mechs.  this is the best mech related story I have ever read. as someone that spent over 100 hours in the Armored Core garage while never starting the final mission, this is right in my strike zone.

hi author, I want to suggest somethingin the latest chapters, XT has some argument with Teng Qigang, now we all know TQ will contact his boss ( Cao Song). Cao song will find different way to harm / kill XT or XT's loved ones and XT will have to do much things to save them. Author, we all know this kind of story plot and it's toooooo boring 🤧. if it 1,2 times then it's okay but it's not good to keep repeating it. We all readers have read this kind of plot thousands of time. So I want to suggest something.why not make XT kind of Anti-hero / evil mc. He is gang leader, add some detective kind people group for him. who collects all information for him and keep him updated about new rising stars or his competitor in current scenario. so it is kind of information network for XT.  Now if you make story like after XT Argus with Teng Qigang. XT will ask his information group to find all details about Teng Qigang, his background and his boss and all thing. XT will plan to destroy Cao Song and Teng Qigang before even they can do anything to XT. this kind of anti-hero feels much better than that boring same hero plot. XT will use this group to find all competitor and destory them before they even know who's is planning in background. please consider this suggestion and see if you can add it in upcoming story plot.😁😁

Well, Though There are only 5 chapters for now, I can see a great potential in this book. The worm setting made me thrilled and it felt as if I myself was experiencing all those events. I have already read the other book of the author which was quite good and I think is book can also be equivalently good. Waiting for further updates.

a good novel.easily one of the best in this trial period (for me).no system. a likeable mc (for me tho).few cliche.####################

Nice concept, nice storyline, nice and flowing grammar. A great and unique system novel, this deserves more than five stars. All I can say now is, update more.

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