The overall story theme is childish and full of vanity for me who is interested in developmental issues..But, the writing is good and the author is committed to the story.
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A novel with this level of grammar errors should not be published. it reflects poorly on the site. Unreadable/ poor sentence structure/ no “flow” at all.— good on you for learning english but your novel Need serious work, even an editor would be hard pressed to fix it.
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I just randomly found this book, oh my, it's interesting, I keep going reading. Yo, author, do some magic and bring some more chapters, please, and yes, world background, character design, plus thrill, and so on. I am just a common reader and yes, the writing quality is also fine, come see itself, check it out.
Interesting take on the whole gender bender genre. I wonder if he/she would be surprised when she/he gets out of the game. I would like to read more so please don't give up, the book really has my attention. I just wish you could have posted this book/ come up with the idea of this book sooner so I could enjoy it years earlier. If you continue with writing this book it will be a good hit with the vr/gender bender/ god/goddess/higher power genre and, if what I am reading is right then maybe a calamity or apocalypse or a alien/monster/demon war/world takeover/anailation. So please keep up the good work author!!!
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