World of cultivation, influential victim sickly and our main character got a proceeding in his pain. He got conformity and many other efficacious resources. This little dangerous since many characters are given so many sources from start but if the author explains it well then it will be a conforming novel.
This story is absolutely great, do you want great dialogues ? CheckGreat characters? CheckYou want a lively world and great world building? Check tooFor anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!
Insanity, I don’t know how can you read this stupid novel. The story is non existant and the concept of time is fked up, the MC is lazy as fk, I mean 30 years to only increase in 4 minor lvls..🙄 The language is hard to understand in some parts, and some content/explanation is missing thus creating lots of loop holes in the story.If you like this novel, I advice you to have a mental checkup ASAP.
oooh boy, this is poorly written with Ok translation. If you want something brainless to pass time this will work. If you are looking for a proper city builder skip this story. There is little reason or logic to much of what occurs. All the characters including MC are very flat and 2D. Every simple action the MC makes gets praised as genius ....
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