It was really well writen i feel as thinthe begining went a little fast in some parts but the points all came through nicely overall great story cant wait for the continuation
KiBiBiK's review series:One sentence review: A pretty interesting cheat power that gets ruined through boring repetition of the plot as well as uninteresting and unrelatable characters (And also boring and fake dialogues).Detailed review: An interesting cheat power that has tremendous potential in terms of treasure hunting. I had great hopes for the future but the story clearly showed its level of less than mediocrity from the beginning itself. I could think of tens of scenes and uses of this power straight out of my mind in a couple of seconds but the author decided to stick with 'storage' gambling. Just that. Repeat that. Repeat that. Repeat that.Did n't you get annoyed? Exactly that's my problem here. 60+ chapters done and the author is cycling the same thing again and again. And let me tell you, this thing is new and but not the coolest. (I believe 130+ is still the same thing)Is there a hook that makes you read the novel? NOIs there an interesting character or MC that makes you continue reading? NO. (Some might like the characters- but I find them dull)Another big problem is the unnecessary racial discrimination and slurs used. Just freaking unneeded. "Yellow" this. "Yellow" that. Seriously. You could do better.Logic: Somewhat works somewhere. But I find big loopholes everywhere in terms of modern legal system as well as personality. A foreign student who got enrolled in a 'Fake' university will be in the process of DEPORTATION. But the MC can do whatever he wants. Maybe, the author will touch that up later? who knows?It is illegal to work or earn money for someone with a Student Visa. This guy is making money and then publicizing it.Let's forget this assuming he is a US citizen or permanent resident. But he is clearly not American. A stranger who he just met is willing to invest money trusting him without questions? And even gives 60-40 share? Seriously? What year is this?Characters are too loud and dull. "Hey Buddy" hundred times. The usage of God in this novel is HORRIBLE and annoying. You are Cheating for God's sake and still say God loves me. Too lazy to write anything else..YawnI read this much leaving my brain locked up. Good luck.You might like it.ProsA unique modern settingAn interesting cheat powerConsAll the sentences above
This novel is basically what you would imagine the son of heaven to be.There's a lot of exaggeration you would maybe even think if it is a gimmick. This novel is very similar to History Number 1 Founder, Library Of Heaven's Path and to some extent History Strongest Senior Brother. So if you loved any of these novels mentioned you will be able to enjoy this novel.
I've read the first 49 chapters, and so far, I have nothing serious to complain about. The protagonist has a tragic past that adds depth to the character, providing an interesting path for development. The world where the story takes place offers many fascinating possibilities.The only thing I have to complain about is the changes in narrative perspective and when the author reveals something that will happen in the near future, only to later return to the present and describe how that thing happened. Both complaints are based on my opinion, and others may find them positive.I hope the author continues writing this novel and improves more and more.
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