Crepúsculo – Vampiro Primordial

I've read upto chapter 118 and I can say that its different from my normal reads, im dropping this novel because I feel that the way the story is developing doesn't feel enjoyable anymore, his distrust in other survivors although makes sense, just seems forced and doesent make to much sense, not only has he not been betrayed by anyone to scar him to the point that upon first meeting, he would instantly distrust someone to the degree he does, the writer also forces a side character he created as a sacrificial lamb to further the point no one can be trusted by making her go back to an enemy that wants her dead just so she can screw the main character that she interacted with for less than a minute and was saved by, just to push his point that survivors can't be trusted.the world building and other aspects of this novel are brilliant but I just feel the novel is going to be that all survivors are greedy and dangerous and that the only things he can trust are the current two and any more pets he might tame I  future chapters.other than that the writing quality was great, although I'm not great at English myself (my first and only language) I didnt notice any flaws and it was an enjoyable read, but I cant promise an English major will say the same.

Same old handsome mc and fattty bestfriend and ofc same old one dimensional third rate villian and face slapping no need to waste your time on this trash

Sounded cool but as your typical chinese martial arts novel its pretty meh with it coming up with **** as it goes along, I'm also pretty sick of the basic ass **** names along with boring tropes and the way they talk

Some very good trial reads are not selected . However, the bad ones are getting selected. This one has failed the trial read.I really liked this one. It definitely could improve in some aspects , even then it was countless times better than some cliche novels.

REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉Nice Synopsis! I am hooked! Definitely will add this and read for more!

"Hush my son, I'm here. I will protect you,"

"Because if I knew I was sent here to fight I would have choosen another school. Also this will be the last time you'll ask and talk about the owner of this school's revenge. It's aboutu his daughter, she died because of one of the founder of the Island inside Bermuda triangle but no knows for sure.  This last part, promise me that it will not go out from your mouth until the right time comes." Carl explained.

This all happened while my legs were wrapped around Mae's petite waist, my breasts pressed against her back, as she carried me so as to increase our speed tenfold or more. Despite being half dwarf, she could run quite fast and move even faster by pushing herself along with earth magic, specifically, Earth Ripple... or maybe she was using Earthen Undercurrents? Regardless, after about an hour, we reached our destination, the largest of the three settlements other than the city, and we were both thoroughly soaked in my milk. Two minutes after we reached the center of the settlement, we were surrounded by a massive number of orcs, all of whom were evidently VERY aroused... well, they always are. From what we could tell, only the chieftain of the settlement, a noble orc, was not near us, instead he was busy forcing himself onto a human woman, with another woman next to her who looked like she was eight or nine months pregnant with a large number of orcish children. He was the first one I killed, with a water blade to the neck. After that, all hell broke loose, and I wound up getting pushed down by the orcs, one of them reaching for my skirt before Mae managed to rescue me, chopping off that orc's hand as the first thing.