This story is promising. Aside from the rushed plotline at first few chapters, and some gramatical errors (as long as I can read and undertsand -boe from reading translations-it's forgiveable for now) it was to me a decent read. It's an interetsing plot considering this assasin trope has a different twist.The first few chapters need improvements, there's too many things going on. However, once you passed chapter 6, things paced better. Characters now have a slightly better depth. Storyline are not rushed anymore. Overall, this one is a keeper for now. Keep improving and keep the story going! I'd like to see how it goes in the end.
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