All I can say is Peak!!!!the Lovecraftian elements pulled me in, the grammar and overall writing made me stay and now, the world building and lore keeps me begging for more chaps.only 7 chapters in and I'm glad I gave this work a chance.please author, don't drop this.this work has the potential for greatness. ✨
I-This is the first review I've ever written but I had to write one for this book. It's not an exaggeration to say this is one of the worst books I have read in a long time. I liked the concept but the execution wasn't absolutely gutter trash. Overall, it's a very basic book with noticeable plot holes that experienced writers wouldn't leave, it also has very one-dimensional characters who just seem to follow a set of shallow rules to react to different situations. The plot progression and world-building don't flow well and are very unnatural, and what's even more unnatural, to me at least, is the character interactions, I have literally cringed at some of themI think it's a readable book if you're just starting out on reading web novels, but if you have any semblance of standards for these types of books or if you have read anything that's actually average in quality or above, then I would advise you to stay away from this. I hope this helps.
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