I may not be a Nobelist but I can say this is one of the novels people like us who have been rejected will love to be in since if it was me l would have become strong during my 1000th rejection
The story needs an editor. I couldn't understand what the h*** was going on in the first chapter. Like when he woke up and touch something soft I thought he was gay cause he kept calling the girl a he.
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Overall the story and writing is great, but I must say that there is no character development, it looks to me that the character is just stagnant and having fun with girls. I wont say that is bad, but at least add some more interesting events.
So far from what I've read it's seems to be a really good story and I feel it could go far. Keep up the great work and sending out chapters. Love you man
don't waste ur time ... only racisism is main plot hear......racisism also have some limits...but this author surpassed all......it is increases as the no of chap increses
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