The author creates a world that's both exciting and intense. The characters are ruthless and the writer's way of portraying fights and battle scenes makes this all the more interesting. I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel. I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!
It’s frustrating, I thought this novel will be a good read but it’s not. Apocalypse and regression is one of my favorite genres but this novel is a mehhh for me.And because of the woman, getting past chapter 40 is hard. She is a BURDEN, I didn’t even bother remembering her name.The Mc? Too many stupid decisions. I don’t want to dishearten you author but this is my honest review.
Honestly, the author is way too fast paced with this story, they could have started slow, progressed the character and world development and then prepared Jarvis for the fight against the demon lord or whatever. It takes just a couple of chapters for Jarvis to win the fight and it takes even less time for him to develop better technology. Also, the system, it would have been better if he got knowledge rewards instead of straight up real people, it makes the story and effort shallow and the people feel soul-less. The characters as well feel a little shallow and empty, let them develop with more screen time or whatever is the equivalent.Overall, a great story concept and execution for a first try attempt, I assume. Just slow down to story and let it breath and settle a little.
"You saw that chain right?" Karin looked towards Naruto and got a low hmm from him, "that is the Adamantine attacking chains technique, an incomplete version of the real Adamantine technique"
Well, it was fun while it lasted, but since I got bored after attaining the Pinnacle of Perfection Realm, I thought it might be better to pass down one of my Immortal Artefacts to someone I favoured. Like that old man, Mr Whatzisname, who stole one of my Artefacts and passed it down to his descendants.
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