It could be a good story, but it is translated very poorly. Many phrases make no sense at all, and it’s too difficult to try to understand what is meant.
I hope the author considers using a better translator, in future.
I love how the emotions of the characters are expressed. Chloe is a total mess; she shouldn’t have to even debate on who she should be with. I think the Author did a good job.
There are too many inconsistencies in storyline. Fir example, Emily is to proven guilty at the same time proven innocent by Chloe and her team. Max is the culprit then Max is helping Emily. Lucas is Emily brother, then Lucas is prosecuting Emily.
It's really difficult to follow the story.
I read as far as chapter eight because there were too many grammar errors.
The storyline sounds like it could be a great book, and your characters are good, but trying to make sense of the sentences is so distracting. It makes it really hard to understand and enjoy the book.
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I hope the author considers using a better translator, in future.
It's really difficult to follow the story.
The storyline sounds like it could be a great book, and your characters are good, but trying to make sense of the sentences is so distracting. It makes it really hard to understand and enjoy the book.