When a strong bad ass Mafia Don falls hard for a woman! Yup my kinda story! I hope there’s one for Kara’s and Lucas story. Either way, whatever story this author has in store for us next. I can’t wait to read it!
I Love and appreciate the author’s consistency with the characters throughout the story. Every chapter will keep you engaged. I also appreciate how she threw in some realistic situations in there and how the main characters dealt with it. Certainly will take you in for a journey. Love this!
It depends on what you want to reread: the full arc of what you are talking about is at chapter 2623 when Mo Fan just got his permanent 50% power upgrade on all elements and the cold plague gets introduced. They need to go into invaded enemy territory by the sharkmen and secure a high energy earth flame pistil vs northern mercenarys C2640. While the battle of FanXue mountain starts at C2660. Post battle negotiations starts at C2699. I hope this helps
The story moves too quickly and there is not enough back story. Sadly, this book feels like multiple ideas was slapped together with no real reason. There is too many grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. There is potential, but this book needs A LOT of editing and rewriting to get there.
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