your story is amazing we all like this story , your imagination, story development skills are too amazing but some grammar mistakes are there but the characters can hide that and last but not least the fights are amazing๐๐๐๐๐๐
Pretty good start. Loving the unique design of the world. Characters feels pretty real and can relate to them. Story is pretty straight to the point, no BS or anything like that. Need more!!! Hurry up and publish lmao
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