Author has a issue with the concept of show not tell, he has created an interesting world, but as the story has progressed everything has devolved into lengthy descriptions without any substance. It feels like bad writing, this story started out so well and has so much potential but is ruined by the writing style, the last few chapters i read we didn't see a character once, just boring descriptions of how humanity is so advanced etc ,like dude no one wants to read that.
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