Your style of writing is amazing. You need to change the clashes between leads from stupid misunderstandings to something that will end up special in 1 or 2 episodes. not long lasting stupid misunderstandings. that was frustrating.
You are good, you can do better. I trust tou
The book is being heavily edited right now. I’m doing a reread of the book so I can get the inspiration to finish it once and for all. Thank you all for your support.
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You are good, you can do better. I trust tou