Well everyone, if you see one you had seen all..This is one of those "I can see hints" series. Where instead of hints, it actually answer mate. Hint and answer is different. But I wouldn't judge, you can call it whatever you like..We had read about ocean.. Tunnels... And now, island..
I have no clue what I'm reading 90% of the time. you seem to be trying so hard to make this seem like an original story.... but it's a fan fic, simple as that, so making it so confusing and convoluted. no need for some overly complex grand design. 22 chapters in and the story has barley anything to do with douluo. of your going to make a douluo fanfic then do that. this isn't your original world stop making it so complex as if this was an original story. ruins the whole purpose of it being a fanfic. otherwise take out the douluo stuff, and make an original world and sick with it, or get rid of the weird af system and multiple reincarnators and trial candidates or what ever the heck is going on here. it just doesn't work. fanfics are ment to use original works and twist it around, while your trying to make an original work and add other non original stuff into it.
I like it. The story is good, and the MC is competent. They actually care about the things that they create, and are actually pretty strong, despite being a stone. I like this book.
it's been more that a year and i think it's time for me to go. once in a while i will come to see if this masterpiece got any new chapters but until then goodbye. hope u all the best author
Good start to the novel. The story is blend of mystery, slight romance(currently but probably more in the future), fantasy. The characters in the novel are well developed and not rushed at all. Furthermore, the plot is engaging and I just can’t wait for more chapters to be released.
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