Hello my lovely readers, it's the author here. I am appreciating the gems you've given so far. And also, I'm glad you all took the time to read my book. It means a lot to me.
I’m 32 chapters in. Character dev is so weak. Their choices make no sense and there’s no explanation as to why. Time is not explained well at all. At one point thought we were a couple months in then she says 3yrs. It’s all over the place I can’t continue. Had promise. It’s just too jumbled
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