This book had potential but so many bad decisions ruined it i had to sit through 3 chapters of filler face slapping to go through more face slapping for the mc to have seggs with some random person that has no significance to the story besides the lemon chapter
New up and coming writers are very fresh with their ideas. It's still in it's starting phase, with only 12 chapters, but it feels like it already has a clear plan going forward. The characters are human-like, with intense annoyance and cursing like what you'd expect from kids with a high-school background. It's also great that the the main character has a young personality and isn't too serious.It feels like it's going in a great direction, and with the promise of a female character in the synopsis, I think it'll be a great story! Hopefully it's not going to be a romance-centric story, considering the constant flowing of romance in this generation.
No matter who you are, if you have read this, feel free to leave any comments—I am happy to engage with you. I also hope you can share your thoughts and suggestions about my story. - from the author.
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