the blurb hints of mystery, romance and action. it could be more concise, though.
nice intro chapter. seems like an interesting story.
if possible, proofread the chapters to fix the grammar issues (verb tense consistency, punctuation, some typos, dialogue, etc.)
This novel is sooo good. I wouldn't mind reading all future books of the author...my only problem though is...it needs editing...badly. Am sure the author is a man and he got the anatomy of the woman wrong!!! Man... the clit and vagina are two different things...
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nice intro chapter. seems like an interesting story.
if possible, proofread the chapters to fix the grammar issues (verb tense consistency, punctuation, some typos, dialogue, etc.)