Awaken: Descent of Ash

If you're thinking of giving this novel a try then please do so and give me feedback.This is my first novel I've ever written. I've had this story on my mind for so long.This was initially supposed to be a manga but after realizing how time consuming drawing is, I decided to make a novel instead. I have already written out the most important events in the story, and I also know what the ending will be. It will be the kind of ending that will completely change how you look at the story after finishing it.Anything that's confusing right now will be explained later on and all of the small details in dialogue or the way characters act are important.

You know, every so often you read a book and go "Mkay, this is good...maybe I should keep reading." And the next you know you have finished 7 chapters and now crave MORE!!! GIMME MORE!!!!!!*Heavy breathing.*Sorry I lost control there for a moment. A-hem! As I was saying this is a damn good novel and I can't wait to read all of it. A+

HI guys:), I'm very excited to share my first work on here. It might not be the best since its my first work (of course its a 5 star for me tho hehe) and I'm figuring out what to do as I'm going but I hope everyone enjoys the read, I've always wanted to make my own world and this is my first step to it. So enjoy everyone and thank you sm for your view and please let me know if there's anything I can improve on, any feedback is welcome:)