This novel is one of the few good ones out there. I have been following it for quite a long time and I have to say although there is mistake in grammar here and there it still puts the point forward. I saw that few of the authors of other novel are Saying he copied their novels and I don't really see where though, if its just the lewd scenes that's although kinda bad but its not something irredeemable. So author-san really love your novel don't worry about those people and continue your work.
Hi dear readers, author here. I have waited a little while until I made my own review. I tried writing another modern novel with some angst and heart breaks. I am planning to make this story short but full of roller coaster of emotions.I hope you will like this. Have a good time reading.
I bought all the current chapters to see if it was worth reading further and sadly it isnt to be.The novels synopsis is good and I have always enjoyed a good kingdom building themed story. Yet this one is dry, empty and just very bland. The progress of development is interesting but it jumps to fast around in its progress and misses some obvious points of technology that could have been developed. I could not find anything of merit, or to relate to with this MC just every chapter would appear as he wakes, decides to exercise, visit his old man with some ground breaking theory or invention, visits some industries and then goes home to develop further ground breaking developments then goes to bed. It just really didn’t inspire enthusiasm within me.Perhaps if the author introduced some tragedy, some form of perhaps romance etc may have given it some missing factors to develop further but even the war scenes were just robotic in delivery. Not to say, they sounded robotic, just very much a shopping list on how to do things.Overall, it has a good idea and a lot of potential, it is just the delivery was uninspiring and simply fell flat for me.Tl;dr - it has potential but it is up to the reader to determine this.
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