I have to say this is a great novel and once you get around to 150 you learn so much and see the great potential this novel has! I hope we can eventually get 2 chapters a day 🤩
Oh man, really needs an editor and a class on how and why not to creep on your underage chambermaid... Also I just learned that apparently in China a 14 year old girl is considered legal, there is a lot to unpack here.
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My honest thought when you write a new novel is whether I should invest my time on your new story or not. It is not because I do not like your writing it is because you will continue updating or not like you put your other work on hiatus. About this story I like it but you need to focus on the good editing of this book there are various mistakes. And I'm still waiting for when you will continue updating the Talent swallowing system.
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