Alpha’s Hate And Redemption

Interesting and captivating Story. The only thing annoying me with this story is that it isn't finished already so I can keep binge-reading it xDWell written author.

I feel like those officers should be more interested in why the 8 year old is working instead of in school than how busy it is. Is anyone going to talk about child labor or call the cops or something? Age him to 16 and this whole story works a lot better. Good though.

The author keeps changing the names of people , techniques, sects and other official divisionsIts a translation thing, not a grammatical thing but still makes it hard for an immersive experience Just fix the translation and its an easy five star novel

I like the overall theme of this story. I just wish that it had been fleshed out more. Most stories at this point are somewhere between two and three hundred chapters while this one is is less than 50. Hopefully the author sees this and expands on the world background and character building especially in the early chapters. Overall a great story but poor depth and development.

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This is my second review as I feel it needed another one….the story can be predictable at times but there’s only so much a human can do to make things unpredictable…Khione needs to come back and once she does this is automatically a 5 star