everything progresses well and even if the middle portion is a little elaborate, the author has done well to explain details to help readers understand better. translation quality is one of the better ones and is satisfactory. although errors in english and grammar take place in the novel, i would consider it to be lesser than most. character design is done well especially for the few main characters though one or two are not as elaborated as i would wish for but this elaboration is enough to be considered satisfactory. author has made it simple to understand/remember the different places and people mentioned in the book so i am extremely satisfied. i hope people who have not read this novel yet do so because i truly think that they would be surprised at how amazing, heroic and heart-wrenching this novel is, just like me. prepare to be shocked, so please get ready to cheer, curse angrily and have some tissues at any time you read! hehe
Beautiful novel put to shame by translator. I remember reading translations of this novel on a site called walkthejianhu (or something similar) and they pulled it off wonderfully, and they weren't even getting paid or taking donations (as far as I can remember), they were purely translating it because they enjoyed the novel and wanted others to read it as well. It's very sad to see such a wonderful novel be translated so badly, please up the quality or get a new translator altogether. Hurry and catch up to previous translations as well please...
I like your writing style but some how the king here was too self absorbed and dint come out worthy of this selfless mate. The way he let his mate physically and emotionally suffer, I felt he needed redemption and not straight forgiveness
Definitely not bad, no annoying system and mc isn't annoying. The world building is pretty lacking though. At first I was reluctant but so far it isn't terrible.
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