Gary stu MC. Gets everything handed to him on a silver platter. Growth is too fast. Author constantly contradicts himself and the MC consistently just makes the most nonsensical decisions. Author frequently has to nerf the character .
Basecly, the enviroment in this VRMMO is well made, we know that there is a world with mortal in a culture based on Vikings, and we know for sure that there is a lot of villages and possibly living in different biomes. That, for me, was a interesting idea, because the protagonist in playing a game where he is a god and have to make people follow his religion, praising and praying for him, because he get stronger as he gain more followers. But, the problem is that the author does not focus on this side of the story, the interesting one, he atcually focus on the RPG part of the game with all of the generic things we see in EVERY VRMMO novel, it's kinda desapointing see the author spending more effort in the generic part than in the interesting one where he can work with the mortal's personalitty, culture, world building, other religions, villages, hierarchy in the villages or even in his own religion. When the protagonist leaves the mortal world and go do his RPG stuff (Grinding, Pk, basicly killing people (When one of the most generic little villains like young masters and people with idiotic reason for try PK someone... dude, they still on beta, why someone would possibly try PK other players to get their itens and get stronger when they're gonna lose everything when the game is released?) and monsters, or searching treasures, but i don't know about that part for sure since i didn't even half of the story. I won't stop reading because i am hopeful that the author will make the MC explore further in the mortal world rather than make him interact with a lot of plain and generic characters with 0 importance for the story or the game itself. I think that grinding all the time is stupid since is just a beta, yeah, you will gain more experience fighting the monsters, but wans't the MC a professional player in this kinda of game? Would make more sense see him exploring the world as much as he can so he can find hiding NPC's, treasures, and places and to spread his religion, or even stablish a conexion with the important NPC's from big villages and stuff.
Dark of night and waxing mooncome to us a single poolhear us sing our witches' songand send us moonlight clear and strongEarth and water, wind and fireone and all you must conspireto banish bad for goodness sakecos I need moonshine for my cakeWeary travelers long agoshared their bread and made a vowthat they will be forever friendsand so shall be until time ends
Nothing to be said, this is an alt account. Am I being shameless reviewing my novel twice? Yes! Yes I am.But this novel is awesome.......I think, so read it! Please 😜😜😜
Based on the synopsis, we can conclude that this is a kingdom building novel. It’s written by the author of HN1F , August Eagle, and novels written by August Eagle are always great! Though I’m a bit sad that the previous novel in trial read wasn’t picked, I hope this one will be.
One of the best stories I've read definitely one of my top five, you don't know what you are missing please read if you lov fantasy, yuri, harem and goddesses you'll enjoy this ant wait for more love Rita
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