Abandoned Card System

is it just me or is this just a poor rip off/fanfic of kings avatar      .                                                                                                

I loved the story but I wish the writer will update more. I ready want to read the next one. I also loved how powerful the MC is. It is so much fun and again I still wish the Writer will update more.

Yes there are mechanical/grammar errors. There are always errors in every story. Don't let them distract you from the genuinely entertaining tale.I hope you like details! Because DETAILS ABOUND. How many chapters are dedicated to the character creation menu? MORE THAN YOU'D THINK. But I still found it interesting, in a munchkin way. It's human nature to maximize.I want more, and am eagerly awaiting the next updates.

Grammar sucks, but since it's netorare I can bear, but so far there's no netorare scene, when can we expect? Hopefully it will be that Senior Sister.

Sure a beautiful story!🥰❤️one of my favs ❤️♥️ make sure I read and review 🥳please support a new writer

Walking around the compound, Melissa started to chat with Zack.

"Please stay still, this will be quick." Xiulan whispered. Her whisper was almost inaudible but Dong Yong still managed to hear it. The poor spy's heart was thumping madly from the nervousness.

Physically, there was nothing wrong with me. He decided to check my blood next. Trying to move as little as possible through the coughing fits, he managed to extract some blood. Leaving me with Jakob, he raced towards his study to look it up.