honestly really impressed. I read your other novel- the fairy and the wolf one, and ended up dropping it after 370 chaps. Despite having read the other novel however I honestly can't believe this was made by the same person. It's only 14 chaps yet it has a near perfect start. It introduces us to the interesting main characters, teases us with their complex personalities, and then drops us into some good old-fashioned combat, that gives us some glimpses at what we can expect from the future brawls. I AM HOOKEDonly thing I'm worried about is the harem aspect, I like harem... BUT not when everyone is in the harem. like it's fine for MC to like see, but when ever female character is there to either have, fantasize, or become a slave to sex, then it devalues the whole story.there's already the mom, sister, wolf, guard, and its only 14 chapters. sure those are just the ones he "loves" but let's be serious for a moment, it's not lookin so good. I hope this book does better on this front then the wolf one
Hi, hello. Like every other person I came in the review section to review this. I am not going to get into the story I will just tell you how I feel, and it is upto you guys to read this or not.I came here reading that review of that pixel art pfp dude and read like all the 6 chaps. Plot is cliche and not to my taste. I mean it is generic, 'I got stuck in the game and now I have to get stronger to save the world.' I maybe had missed, but I haven't seen any grammar mistakes till now and the writing is good but character dressing and their expression aren't give importance much and so does the background.But it is decent till now with the slow pacing... (My opinion btw. if this doesn't remain decent or will get better like the pixel pfp guy has said, I will drop ts.)
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