Even though they were in a relationship for about seven and a half months, they haven't thought about their first meet. It is him who started that conversation. He just playfully asked her to come and meet him. But she took it so seriously and finally it happened.
has potential but the grammar is terrible.first chapters seem to be writen in a rush with not much thought put into them.story so far is just so so.hope the author improves.
For now, the plot seems pleasant to read. I hope it will continue like this. We can detect that the author tries to mix several systems of magic perfected by authors on webnovel while putting his own personal touch.There is potential, it remains to see the result.
my rating is based on what i already know plus what I've already written so far. So it's not solely based on the currently released chapters alone. If you guys stick around you will find out in the future. I've already written 27 chapters by the way.
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