........................................................................It was good, but needs improvement .The author can do better.The story line is interesting, But needs more info about various things, as the readers may get confused, on what they're reading. Some may know but mostly won't.Anyways Good work!Keep it up!
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"Junwangye hasn't woken up from his sleep, Niangniang (Your Highness)," one of the servants answered me in a small voice. As if afraid that her voice would wake Hui An.
He spent half an hour trying everything until his eye fell on the dead Tiger, he approached it and checked its back where it had been pierced by sharp mana stones, there was a bone the size of a baseball bat, forgetting the nauseating feeling of pulling out a bone of a dead beast he pulled it out and tried it against the wall. This bone had been strengthened by mana for decades, it broke the tip of the mana stone as easily as if it was a normal stone. Picking it up Thomas realized it was very heavy for such a small thing, like this he kept breaking and picking stones until he had nowhere else to put them and left the cave.
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