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I have a feeling this your novel is gonna be successful. But there are something's I pinpointed when reading, the tenses you used are kind of confusing, that's all. I hope you correct them for the future.Well nothing much to say but: Welcome to the World of Authors!💥🎉
Probably one of the only sci-fi stories that are truly good in this site. I'm can wait to see how the sequel develops. I hope the author stays true to his words and delivers it to us.
I came here in search for the most deserving winner of WPC140 because I participated in the previous one myself, and I'd like to see how well the participants are doing for this biweekly prompt. I'd say, among all entries, this one is the most deserving for the gold tier award. It doesn't disappoint. Writing - I love the style and the tone used for this. It's light, fun, and has a refreshing feel to it. I don't need to stress myself with grammar pet peeves because this has little to no error at all. Very understandable for a casual reader. Stability - very steady, keep it upCharacters - gold-tier description, and they are really entertaining that they hardly make u boredDevelopment - nice, nice pace. I enjoy the comedy and the seemingly easy flow of the story's progression World - vet vivid imagery, keep it up again! Good luck! Hope u win! Read this everyone!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The Shadows lept at Jake, but when Black Emperor appeared and swung it's sword at The Shadows the new stand went straight to the wall to then bounce to the ceiling and finally bounce at Jakes shadow. It lingered for a bit to the surprise of everyone else in the room. White Avalon swung it's sword at The Shadows but was blocked by a fully black sword that came out of no-where. "What the hell Jake! Get your Black Emperor to move it's sword! and why does it look like a shadow?" James' Asked. Jakes only reply was to Summon Black Emperor behind him, Jake and James shared confused faces. The Shadows shot through James' leg and onto his shadow to then rest there, until Jake yelled out "James! I know what his ability is! It's to-" Jake was then silenced by a punch to the face by The Shadows: Jake. "What the hell! Where did shadow me come from?!" Jake yelled out before covering his nose with his hands. "When i jumped onto your shadow i stole a good amount of it, over half of it. Usually for strong people like you it takes a bit to take as much as i did but since you were off guard it was pretty simple. When i stole your shadow i made it summon The Shadows: Black Emperor. Kekekekeke, i'm invincible!" The Shadows Explained with an all too taunting posture.
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