two main problems.First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes...The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time. When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.
This entire story is amazing. The only issue is that I read so much that I end up with nothing to read. This is one of those books that I could read and then get upset that I read it all.
As a child progress of MC is good... Plz regularly update the chapter...I am very excited to read how Evan will save her aunt! ..................................Regularly update the chapter.......And thanks #author for some amazing chapters....
So just a heads up, this book ends earl at ablit 250ish chapters. Thr writer had 3 million + words but the editor cut it down to 900k apperently and the writer has started working on another project.
This was an utterly amazing book! It kept me on the edge of my seat and I fell in love with the characters. The author did a really good job of representing minorities without playing in to classic stereotypes. While I do wish the author developed the main villain a bit more at the end, overall it was a fantastic read and I highly recommend it.
the MC is pretty dense and nieve, but his background and age kind of explain this. feels like a flawed person who doesn't always make the right choices, not like the author had him make dumb decisions for the plot. the story overall is pretty good and original. The pacing just seems off, I think it may be due to how much the MCs travel is detailed or details about background characters when it's not clear if they are important to the story.
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