Actually, I don't want to write a review this early but I found this novel quite gems. The MC really cautions in his every action which makes him more smarter than other novels that related to the modern setup.
Right now(Chapter 7) there are 2 potential waifu appearing in the story and MC didn't immediately fall in love with them by just their beauty. I think it's good development on this aspect.
The other things that I really love it on this novel is its length of the chapters were quite long it should be around 3k words, compared to those 1k words per chap make this novel more readable.
I can see the improvement of grammar from the authors every chapter, I hope that you can keep up this good work. Cheers.
It looks promising, I always love to read modern world setup novel. And this one has interesting idea.
The protagonist has a really good personality, he knows when he needs to be arrogant and know how to endure the hardships.
The system also didn't really give the protagonist superpower as others novel. It could be said that the system in this novel just helping the protagonist a little.
Is the system try to manipulate him? forcing him to seduced 7 maidens? I think there should be a reason behind this. I have to follow it until the end.
This novel is really good for a wish fulfillment. I applaud the author and appreciate his great work. Author please make many girls fall in love with our MC but make it detailed. All the beautiful girls should be pure and untainted, just for vanity’s sake. Loli, mature, and ****. Just like Yun Che in ATG. Thank you. Policewoman, soldier and any type of woman make them all.
Grammar can always be improved but creativity comes from within. Keep it up!
5 stars from your biggest supporter and secret admirer. ;)
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Just started reading the novel and even though the English is a little messy the intent is clear and I am sure in time the author will improve in this area.
The novel is the usual reincarnation with a system storyline however it definitely isn’t of the same style, after all having to score 7 maidens and wed them otherwise it’s game over player, has the pressure on from the beginning.
I won’t add to much but suffice to say the author has indeed gotten a decent storyline and I hope he continues with it to the end.
This novel seems interesting and has potential. MC doesn't like to be manipulating or control by the system. The system also gives MC information clearly without holding back.
I'm looking forward to see how is this gonna play out. I hope that author could increase the amount of chapter release per day.
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Right now(Chapter 7) there are 2 potential waifu appearing in the story and MC didn't immediately fall in love with them by just their beauty. I think it's good development on this aspect.
The other things that I really love it on this novel is its length of the chapters were quite long it should be around 3k words, compared to those 1k words per chap make this novel more readable.
I can see the improvement of grammar from the authors every chapter, I hope that you can keep up this good work. Cheers.
The protagonist has a really good personality, he knows when he needs to be arrogant and know how to endure the hardships.
The system also didn't really give the protagonist superpower as others novel. It could be said that the system in this novel just helping the protagonist a little.
Is the system try to manipulate him? forcing him to seduced 7 maidens? I think there should be a reason behind this. I have to follow it until the end.
Only 7 harem memebers right? Or their are still more?
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5 stars from your biggest supporter and secret admirer. ;)
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The novel is the usual reincarnation with a system storyline however it definitely isn’t of the same style, after all having to score 7 maidens and wed them otherwise it’s game over player, has the pressure on from the beginning.
I won’t add to much but suffice to say the author has indeed gotten a decent storyline and I hope he continues with it to the end.
I'm looking forward to see how is this gonna play out. I hope that author could increase the amount of chapter release per day.
Fighting!!