good story, for specific tastes, but that of the multiple personality is a big no, my brain does not want to process that they are the same people, it is a constant anguish, it is like having multiple protagonists, and a lot of names to memorize, it is like that naruto does the clone jutsu, and each one has its appearance, name and personality.
Excellently written!!!
Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. Most of the system novels does not show much detailings about background setup or the world- but this story just blew my mind with the portrayal of the world and the main characters. Author have an excellent command over the language and I wonder why it shows low views for this gem?
Kudos to the author, keep up the good work
I have to say, this story is clearly on point!
The whole description is enough for one to fantasize it just so we can get an idea of the scenery.
Writing quality is
Shameless author here...
So, I've worked really hard to put this story together and it's taken me a long while so I hope anyone reading this enjoys it.
I'm pretty confident in my english, so it should be easy to understand what I'm writing.
I do tend to make things move slowly, it's just my writing style, but I'm sure that if you bear with it you'll be happy when we reach the important parts of the story.
I don't want to give you any of my opinions about the story here because that's up to you to decide...
I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me.
Thanks so much for reading this I hope you give my work a chance, it will really mean the world to me... and take care of yourselves
After I found this book few days ago I've been hooked on it. Sadly my coins and passes were drained on this I was not able to catch up to the releases but everyday I'm getting closer to it. I love this book, my favourite on this app.
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Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. Most of the system novels does not show much detailings about background setup or the world- but this story just blew my mind with the portrayal of the world and the main characters. Author have an excellent command over the language and I wonder why it shows low views for this gem?
Kudos to the author, keep up the good work
The whole description is enough for one to fantasize it just so we can get an idea of the scenery.
Writing quality is
So, I've worked really hard to put this story together and it's taken me a long while so I hope anyone reading this enjoys it.
I'm pretty confident in my english, so it should be easy to understand what I'm writing.
I do tend to make things move slowly, it's just my writing style, but I'm sure that if you bear with it you'll be happy when we reach the important parts of the story.
I don't want to give you any of my opinions about the story here because that's up to you to decide...
I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me.
Thanks so much for reading this I hope you give my work a chance, it will really mean the world to me... and take care of yourselves
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Overall writing quality is truly excellent. The plot is amazing. Can't wait to read more ^^
Author please don't abandon this story! [img=recommend]
Keep up the good work Author![img=recommend]