+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System

Author here!~

This novel will be hentai intended so be careful, although its not every chapter but it would sometimes appear so KIDS begone from here!~

I didn't give full 5 star since although I have confidence on my own writing, it wouldn't be same in other eyes (you! yeah you!).

Its not like I'm genius in English, so I'm taking full minus star for this flaw as my motivation to improve though I doubt that no one will pick it since I'm sure cliche review will appear about it.

this is novel which is created especially for us man of culture, many gentleman should comes here lol!

recommended for people who love sweet nectar, kids need to be scram!
huh? I'm a kid? what? I'm ***** already!

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Dude. My eyes are aching.
I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it,  and a truckload if 5* reviews...
So,  I've decided to give it a spin,  but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube.

I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story,  why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality,  the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value,  as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.

a great jewel, a beauty created by God.
a fantasy of all otaku this novel is a description of my fantasia.
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loving this novel's story and world , wish i could go there myself , the author is obviously very creative , imaginative and intelligent to have created this fine work of art , hopefully he will continue to write this legendary masterpiece