Noice one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] MY Fellow men of culture I recommended this to all of you if you Don't read this novel you are going waste your 99% lifespan, The story is great and readable With GREAT WAIFUS
Accordimg to the first 4 chapters this story is a bit different from the usual cliche. Hope u write more and this book become a success. Btw the start is really good.
Well This îs an Awesome Read with Well Thought characters and Best Waifus
So I would Recomend This To Who ever Pays Visiting Here
Author îs Good Guy Who tries To Be as interactive as possible with us.
Just Keep it up and Dont Change Much Cuș I Can See potential in You kid
This from now on You are renamed As
Kyle_Waifumaker.
This novel is one of the best I've read in a long time. Destroys patterns and the main character is also smart and not a slave to the system. But the novel is very difficult to comprehend and the main character is psychologically broken. I won't continue reading this but I'm glad I saw it
This is one of the most unique and interesting Novels I’ve read. The power system is different and characters feel more than cardboard cutouts, and the story Also flows in a way that it doesn’t
depend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened.
In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel
definitely one of the best novels as a start well executed author was actully listening to the readers that was a super plus point.. was gonna read this after my exam.. sad it dropped..or you can say
"the author had enough"
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So I would Recomend This To Who ever Pays Visiting Here
Author îs Good Guy Who tries To Be as interactive as possible with us.
Just Keep it up and Dont Change Much Cuș I Can See potential in You kid
This from now on You are renamed As
Kyle_Waifumaker.
depend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened.
In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel
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"the author had enough"
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