My Master, My Joo-in

And maybe it's just me but I don't feel that much empathy for the girls because I haven't seen their difficulties, backstory, and the suffering they went through (not that I want to see it either tbh), Idk It just feels a little bit forced. So for me, the whole chapter left me like ._.

Noice this is peak

You called it

oof white woman plays tricks

Annoying backstory flashbacks in the middle of a fights and then a lot of political drama as full chapters of talking. Then we have chapter 12 that ends with a cliffhanger where the scar eye character have a back story on a time a big dragon is in the air and start to breath fire.

On one part it seems mc dont want to get past F rank or is just too dumb and everyone around him are even dumber as mc has so much power and none of them see it living with the guy.

this would literally be so hard oml

Give her a damn blanket you shitheals, thats not how you treat a patient!

He's funny, kind of refreshing yet annoyingly dense, put a little bit of romance in it before it become boring

Was the axe that sharp? Didn't even make no buildup for its end

damn cliffhanger i wanna know how his little sister die

yeah there is constantly large clumps of exposition, plot, or problem solving that feel like parts that you either enjoy reading through or find boring between dnd style monster murder full of clever ploys, gambles for victory, and a grand story full of mystery. while the pacing might be better if it was more evened out I kinda feel like it's the style of writing that the author has to shove a lot of content at you and force you to slow down and think. But regarding the mental states of the characters the author definitely needs to slow down or clarify the major mental changes of the team especial the MC who is having one of the most interesting paths of growth I've seen in a while.

what thee hell were those unecessary pages?