My Lover's Personality Is a Little Strange

[ MAIN CHARACTERS ]

🛡️Sir Eve / Yvonne Chernica

• illegitimate child of Chernica family.
• taken in by nobles. Mother abandoned child for money. Father kicked out of Chernica for being an abusive drunk.
• skilled swordswoman
• After family erased becomes slave then knight
• accidental pregnancy

⚔️ Crown prince / Emperor Theo

• possessive, violent, obsessive, abusive
• feared by all his servants
• was feared and hated as a child
• loses his memory
• had been obsessively searching for Yvonne

☀️ 2nd prince Ernst

• innocent, sincere, caring, a bit child-like
• cares for Yvonne
• was beloved as a child
• mother was empress. Murdered

❄️ Benjamin Ferdinand

• possessive, violent, obsessive, scheming
• killed his father and empress
• became head of family

[ ASPECTS / TROPES ]

• ML loses memory ch 19. ‘Amnesia’
• Fast paced plot
• Fast burn romance. Love at first sight
• He falls first to She falls first
• ML with a trash personality/abusive/careless
• ML thinks FL is faking being Yvonne so he treats her like garbage
• Old enemies who take advantage of ML’s memory loss
• Black magic

This was a trainwreck of a story. Zero world building. The pacing was all over the place. Things just happen with no buildup, no warning, no rhyme or reason. I don't understand the motivation of ANY character here. They behave in such nonsensical ways. Major events just get glossed over like an afterthought. I'm not joking. They established the FL's family as this super important clan, then out of the blue, they just get wiped out, and that's told to us on 2 panels. That's it. They spared 2 measly panels to inform us, "Oh yeah, the FL is now a homeless orphan because her entire clan was exterminated. HUH😕 What the hell happened? Who did that? What were they accused of? How am I supposed to get invested when you don't explain what is going on? What are the stakes? Who are the antagonists? I'm serious, 10 chapters in and I have no idea which person or faction are the primary antagonists. Characters are introduced, and you think they're going to play a major role, then they just die off screen with no fanfare. Lovers reunite after 10 years apart, and the moment is just... completely flat. No emotions, no meaningful exchange... it was like nothing happened.

Guys will just fall in love with the FL at first sight, then she randomly becomes their whole world and having her is their sole motivation to do anything. It's super bizarre. Especially because there is nothing to her. This FL is boring and lame af. The ML is just a wannabe edge lord. They are both very cringe.

This was probably one of the worst manhwa I've ever read. It was poorly written from the very first chapter and never improves. But hey, look on the bright side... if a hack writer like this can get something this dumb published, there is hope for all you aspiring writers and artists out there.

I can't believe the author of my favorite manhwa wrote such a disgusting thing like this. The amount of dislike I have for both character has no limit, the ML is a bastard and mc is so pathetic.