
Yunatama
- Genre: boys love erotica
- Author: watanabe asia
- Artist(s):
- Year: Sep 2007
- Original Publisher:
- Status: Finished
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Rating(3.3 / 5.0, 75 votes)
5 stars
16(21%)
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Also, I need to say what a disservice the ending did to Noel as a character. One of the first reasons we're given to endear us to her and made us root for her is the fact she's been abandoned by her family. She was left as bait and that's a good first reason for us to want her to get the Duke's heart and live happily. In the reset timeline, she doesn't have that. She has an aunt who cares about her, she starts with people who love her. And we spend the majority of the story with her coming to love the Duke's true self, instead of just the overly flowery version of Ru. Her motivations get axed. Her development gets axed. Why are we meant to care about Derux finding Noel when this Noel means nothing to us beyond his funky adventures with them for a handful of chapters?
Why not just have them know each other from the past and forgot it? Like what one of her headaches implied? It just feels cheap.
Story had potential, I'll give it a 7/10 for the art since that's the only thing that carried this but without it, would have given it a solid 4/10.
Note: had to edit it three times :/
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